Fiction is usually sold finished; nonfiction is usually sold on an idea. A literary agent or acquiring editor considering a nonfiction book does not expect a complete manuscript. They expect a proposal: a document that argues the book should exist, that you are the person to write it, that readers will buy it and that you know how you will deliver it. A proposal is a business document and a piece of writing, and it is the single most important thing in selling a nonfiction book the traditional way. This guide explains each section, how long it should be, what agents look for, how to write the hardest parts (the market and the platform), and how to build the raw material for a proposal in Quillen's nonfiction outline.

The short answer

A nonfiction book proposal normally contains an overview of the book, a section on you and your platform, a market and audience analysis, a list of competing and comparable books, a marketing plan, a chapter-by-chapter outline and one or two sample chapters. Together these usually run to a few dozen pages. In Quillen, a nonfiction outline already asks for most of this: the Book Explanation, Book Background, Target Audience and Competition Analysis pages map onto the main proposal sections.

Why a proposal, not a manuscript?

Nonfiction publishing is built on commissioning. An editor wants to know whether the book will sell, and a proposal lets them judge before you spend a year writing. It also protects you, since you can adjust the book to the editor's feedback before it is written. Self-publishing writers also gain from writing a proposal: working through the market and competition sections sharpens a book even if you never send it to anyone. For the structure of the book itself, see how to outline a nonfiction book.

The sections

Practices vary, so check each agent's guidelines, but most proposals contain these sections in roughly this order:

SectionWhat it coversRoughly
OverviewThe book in a few pages: the idea, the promise, why now, why you2 to 4 pages
About the author and platformCredentials, expertise, audience, media, speaking, mailing list1 to 3 pages
Market and audienceWho will buy it and how many there are1 to 3 pages
CompetitionComparable books, and how yours differs1 to 3 pages
Marketing planWhat you will do to sell the book1 to 2 pages
Chapter outlineA summary of each chapter5 to 15 pages
Sample chapter(s)One or two chapters in finished formAs long as needed
Book detailsProposed length, delivery date, any illustrationsOne short section

The overview

The overview is the pitch. It should open with a hook (a problem, a surprising fact or a question), state the premise and the promise, say what the book will do for the reader and why it is needed now. Write it so an editor could read only this and understand the book. Be specific about the reader's problem and how the book solves it: what will they be able to do or understand that they could not before?

About the author and platform

Platform is your existing ability to reach readers: an email list, a following, speaking engagements, media appearances, a professional network, a course, a column. Editors want evidence, not hope. List real numbers where you have them. If your platform is small, say so honestly and describe what you are doing to grow it. Emphasize your expertise: why are you the right person to write this book?

Market and audience

Describe who will buy the book, in concrete terms. "Everyone who wants to be more productive" is too vague; "knowledge workers in shared offices, a group of roughly this size, who already buy books and courses on focus" is a market. Where possible, support this with data: sales of comparable books, the size of relevant communities, trends. Show that the market exists and that you know how to reach it.

Competition

List five to ten recent, relevant books, with title, author, publisher, year and a sentence on each: what it does and how yours differs. Be fair; do not dismiss them. Competition shows that a market exists. What you must show is a gap: an angle, an audience or a depth that those books do not offer. Avoid claiming there is no competition: it implies no market.

The marketing plan

Say what you will do, not what you hope the publisher will. List concrete activities: email to your list, talks, articles, podcasts, partnerships, social channels, events. Be realistic and specific. A plan that matches your platform is more credible than an ambitious one that does not.

The chapter outline

For each chapter, write a paragraph: what it covers, the main points, the examples or evidence you will use and the takeaway. This shows the editor that the book has a structure and that you have thought through the whole of it. The outline is the part of a proposal that most directly mirrors the outline of the book itself, so working on one helps the other.

Sample chapters

Include one or two chapters, usually the first plus another that shows range. They should be your best writing, polished and in the voice of the book. These are what the editor reads to decide whether you can write. Check each agent's guidelines for how many to include.

Common mistakes

MistakeProblemFix
A vague overviewThe idea is not clearOpen with the reader's problem and the promise
Overstating platformEditors checkGive real numbers and be honest
Claiming no competitionImplies no marketShow comparable books and your gap
A marketing plan of hopesNot credibleList concrete things you will do
A thin chapter outlineBook seems unplannedA paragraph for each chapter
Weak sample chapterSinks the whole proposalPolish your best chapters
Ignoring guidelinesMay be rejected unreadFollow each agent's instructions

Do it in Quillen

Quillen cannot assemble a proposal for you, but a nonfiction book's outline holds most of the raw material, and the pages line up with proposal sections.

Quillen outline pageProposal section it feeds
Book Explanation (what the book does, what makes it different, who it is for)Overview
Book BackgroundOverview, and About the author
Target AudienceMarket and audience
Competition AnalysisCompetition
Chapters (with the Insert Chapter template)Chapter outline
Introduction and ConclusionSample chapter and overview

The steps:

  1. Create the book as nonfiction and open Outline. Work through Book Explanation, Book Background, Target Audience and Competition Analysis. See how to outline a nonfiction book.
  2. Build the chapter outline with Insert Chapter. Each chapter has an objective, a key takeaway, a hook, subpoints, a practical application, examples, a transition and potential sources. Condense each into a proposal paragraph.
  3. Keep your evidence in Research and Key Arguments. Your sources and arguments back the claims in the overview and market sections. See how to organize research and sources and how to plan the arguments.
  4. Write the sample chapters in the editor and use Analyze Document to check hedging and wordiness, which the tool counts for nonfiction.
  5. Export the sample chapters with Export then Agents & publishers, and assemble the proposal document in your word processor, following the agent's guidelines.
Quillen's nonfiction outline Book Explanation page, which feeds the overview of a book proposal
The Book Explanation page asks the questions a proposal overview answers.

Checklist

  • An overview that works on its own.
  • A platform section with real numbers.
  • A market defined in concrete terms.
  • Five to ten recent competing books, with your gap.
  • A marketing plan of specific actions.
  • A paragraph per chapter, and one or two polished sample chapters.
  • Guidelines checked for each agent.

Common questions

What is a nonfiction book proposal?

A document sent to agents and editors that argues the book should exist: an overview, author and platform, market, competition, marketing plan, chapter outline and sample chapters.

How long is a nonfiction book proposal?

Usually a few dozen pages, depending on the agent's guidelines and how many sample chapters are included.

Why is nonfiction sold on a proposal?

Editors judge whether the book will sell before the author writes it, and the author can adapt the book to feedback. Fiction is usually sold finished.

What is an author platform?

Your existing ability to reach readers: a mailing list, a following, speaking, media, a network or a course. Editors want real numbers, not hope.

How does Quillen help with a proposal?

A nonfiction book's outline pages (Book Explanation, Book Background, Target Audience, Competition Analysis and Chapters) map onto proposal sections, and the Agents & publishers export formats sample chapters.

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