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The Awakening

And he woke up and noticed that the room was very dark. The sword was taken by the knight. He wondered if the door was locked. He walked across the room, brought his hand up, and turned the knob. The door had been opened.

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Suddenly, he heard a crash from the kitchen. His heart raced in the pit of his stomach. He found something shiny on the floor. It was a beautiful sword. The end result was that he felt bad. "I hate you," she said angrily. He nodded his head. Everything was a deafening silence.